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Submission Agenda: Mary Jane Color Pages [TEST]

Hey there,

This is a sort of sneak-peek/test of some upcoming Submission Agenda pages. These are the first three pages of the in-progress chapter "Supermodel Diversion," featuring Miles + MJ's first meeting (I posted the black and white linework on my Extras feed last month).

I'd been planning to go in and shade these in grayscale (as I did with GOT: Blacked and Game Over Girls) but since I had the plain linework, I asked a past collaborator EternityAndVanity to take a stab at coloring them, and I wanted to post them here to get all your feedback.

So, what do you think? Be honest. Would you like a full chapter colored in this style? All thoughts and feedback welcome.

Cheers,

Pegasus

Submission Agenda: Mary Jane Color Pages [TEST] Submission Agenda: Mary Jane Color Pages [TEST] Submission Agenda: Mary Jane Color Pages [TEST]

Comments

They're interesting, but I think I prefer the style of the GoT comic

That Faceless Dude

Frankly, it "feel" like "plastic" or "rubber".

Michel

I agree, the jeans look pretty good. I do tend to get kind of particular about colors too, as I have a clear picture in my mind of how it should look and giving your art over to another colorist takes a lot of confidence and trust.

While I also think you did an amazing job on the covers, I know you don't have time to pencil, ink and color all on your own. This is good, though I prefer MJ's hair a lighter shade of red. That deep lipstick red is always a dye job. The jeans look great though, as the shading gives them almost a stonewashed look, and coloring denim like that ain't easy. I always prefer color!

Subjectivity

Cool, good to know, thank you!

I hear ya. Thanks!

Thanks for the feedback!

Haha I colored all the covers. Guess I'll stick with me!

I like the grey scale better

alex baker

Absolutely!

Miriam Garrity

I prefer Black and white but not bad!

Nah stick with the classic black and white pencils

Giuliano Derteano

I like it but I prefer whoever colored the covers. Once again not a dislike just different. And I definitely prefer a color version over the line work


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