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SUBMISSION AGENDA: SILVER SABLE [p. 01]

Okay, here we go. The first new chapter of Submission Agenda in almost four years(!) starts now. You'll get a page here every week and I can't wait to share it all with you.

This chapter takes place early in the Agenda, picking up only a few days after Miles has brought Jean Grey to heel. I never explained in the Dark Phoenix chapter how he captured her, but readers of the full text story will know he hired Silver Sable and her Wild Pack to do the job. The mercenaries for hire will take any job if the money's right, but they didn't know what Miles had planned for Jean. Now that the Dark Phoenix is unleashed, it's time for Miles to see the true changes he's brought about in his new consort... and the incredible power she wields... as the two of them set about to tie up some loose ends.

My style and my creative process has changed quite a bit since the last installment of Submission Agenda, and it was a lot of fun to revisit the characters and the world. I've redesigned Miles slightly and for the first time you'll get full shading (sorry, no color yet!).At 16 pages, this chapter will move fast and pack a lot in.

As always, thanks for reading and let me know what you think!

Cheers, Pegasus

SUBMISSION AGENDA: SILVER SABLE [p. 01] SUBMISSION AGENDA: SILVER SABLE [p. 01]

Comments

I just noticed that Sable has a pearl necklace. And also a string of jewels around her neck.

Kraken

Yeah I wanted to make the men look as different as possible. But with men I don’t have to worry as much about making them look sexy, which I think can lead to a bit of sameface. I’ll take your advice!

Critical feedback: I would work on chins & cheeks, especially for the women. More rounded as you have here for Jean, more narrow/slim for Emma, prominent clefted chin for MJ, high and sculpted for Storm, etc. It keep all the women from having too much of a same-face effect. Oddly, your new art style does not do that for the men.

MaskedMarmoset

HOORAY!!!

MaskedMarmoset

Thanks very much!

Your art skills have improved intensively

Houndlord0


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