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Sherlock Holmes Behind the Scenes, pt. 7

Sorry, forgot to post this last night. :)

Kathy left me the big bubble o' technobabble to fill in, though I was helped by a couple of the CTC regulars. 

Another bit that got left on the proverbial cutting room floor: Originally Mycroft was supposed to be played by Swampy, with a pillow stuffed up under his shirt. :)

Dialogue:

Mary Morstan, looking concerned: John--are you all right? You seem--different.

Watson, looking out window, back to her: Oh, I'm just distracted. It's this case of Holmes'. It has me on edge.

Mary: Howso?

Watson: Something doesn't seem right. Holmes isn't--

Holmes (entering): Excuse us, Miss Morstan, but Watson--I need you to accompany me to Brother Mycroft's club. I have a cab outside.


Narration: Shortly--

Holmes (putting finger to his lips) : Remember, Watson--not a word when we enter Mycroft's club!

Watson: Why is that, Holmes?

Holmes (looking in over double door at Mycroft shooting pool, and whispering): Because speaking distracts the shooter.


Narration: Soon, in the "Strangers' Gallery" of Mycroft's club--

Holmes: Mycroft, I need your advice. What do you know about atomic theory?

Mycroft: (large box of pseudo-scientific babble about atomic theory.)

Holmes: Sounds elementary.



Version 2:

Narration: Soon, in the "Strangers' Gallery" of Mycroft's club--

Holmes: Mycroft, I need your advice. What do you know about atomic theory?

Mycroft: ...Whut?

Holmes:(large box of pseudo-scientific babble about atomic theory.)

Mycroft: Sounds elementary.


(If we go with Version 2, we can't do the "I thought he was the smarter brother" gag.)

Sherlock Holmes Behind the Scenes, pt. 7

Comments

HA! :)

FrankHarr

Seems like total silence would work as well as those ST:TNG aliens who only spoke in metaphors...


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