"i'll always be here"
Added 2023-01-17 02:28:42 +0000 UTCheyyyy!! new comic DROPPED >:^D a lot more dialogue now, i looooove creating drama dialogues heheh i feel like this is a kind of a continuation of my other comic "not the same as when we were kids", but it wasnt intentional xD
only more and more alicia gets max away from her...
Comments
Heh. To be honest, your English is better than some native speakers!
Thraximore
2023-01-17 20:13:54 +0000 UTCthank you very much! 💚 oh this definitely sounds way better! i have a bit of trouble with English, since it's not my first language, so minor mistakes happens sometime.
ramahuro
2023-01-17 16:36:36 +0000 UTCVery good character development! One small bit of feedback: on page 2 panel 1, Al says "fall for my enchants" which is awkward phrasing. Wouldn't it be "fall for my charms"? (Unless it's a play on the word Enchanté or something similar.)
Thraximore
2023-01-17 07:01:09 +0000 UTCAwww Iike character development but I always feel bad for the characters when they fight
Panerkraft
2023-01-17 02:50:31 +0000 UTC
