Metal and Magic (Ch. 25)
Added 2026-03-15 07:11:26 +0000 UTCComments
Does Harry suffer from nightmares still, because it would be interesting if the ladies noticed that?
Salvage48
2026-03-16 09:05:56 +0000 UTCI agree! He could've used his magic and problem solved. Instead he's acting kinda stupid. I'm not saying he is dumb, but he is not using his brain and someone will get hurt if he doesn't shape up. I'm not saying that he should stop having fun and partying and sleeping with women. He just needs to dial it back a little bit.
James Trammell
2026-03-16 04:45:06 +0000 UTCCouldn't Harry have just used an extra-strength Reparo on the Ferrari...to get out of paying for the car? Or put a Bombarda Maxima through the radiator of the SUV?
Alun Lewis
2026-03-16 03:22:10 +0000 UTCBeing a manchild is the furthest thing from sexy. Like holy shit, the amount of whining and entitlement this little shit has is stunning.
Hadrian v.E.
2026-03-15 16:32:39 +0000 UTCI agree! Harry could have easily used his magic to defeat the kidnappers. Instead they drove recklessly and could've hurt innocent civilians for no reason.
James Trammell
2026-03-15 14:55:33 +0000 UTCI agree. I don't mind them having fun and being cocky but it needs to be dialed back just a little bit. I still love this story though! π
James Trammell
2026-03-15 14:53:31 +0000 UTCIt is fun but I want to see him start to take things a little more seriously and to help Tony find a balance to
matt tombaugh
2026-03-15 08:08:49 +0000 UTCDecent chapter, but I'm really missing the magic. At this point it's an afterthought even though the entire situation with eh kidnappers should have been solved 3 seconds after they were pointing guns at them.
Hakai
2026-03-15 07:29:19 +0000 UTCGreat chapter!
Cody
2026-03-15 07:25:11 +0000 UTC
