Totally Spies: Toony Horse Play
Added 2017-10-03 12:41:51 +0000 UTCA free story featuring Totally Spies' Clover tooning it up into a big stallion. It's inspired by a DA-Fuze art piece:
https://da-fuze.deviantart.com/art/Clover-Toon-Stallion-FtM-TG-663621889
Comments
Alright! I'll work on the sentences a bit more. Thank you!
Firingwall
2017-10-04 22:34:20 +0000 UTCA good sequence, although I think you could work on Clover's dialogue some, especially after the mental changes start piling up. It's a little weird imagining her using bigger words so much, and sentence structure could use some work as some lines come out as awkward to read/imagine someone speaking.
Karma P
2017-10-04 21:52:44 +0000 UTC
