Corrupts Absolutely 9 - Patron Release
Added 2017-05-21 10:26:34 +0000 UTCThis is the Patron release of part nine of Corrupts Absolutely. This part is about 1,950 words long, and contains themes of reality bending and memory manipulation.
Comments
What is really strange is she is questioning things only up to the point he stated they where messed with. Was she a lesbian, Were they friends, Did he really give her the powers he said he gave her?
Nine Horse Hitch
2017-05-21 20:19:56 +0000 UTCThanks, I was worried at first that I wouldn't have any good opportunities to make any good changes in this part, but I ended up getting a few in. xD
Changer
2017-05-21 11:21:10 +0000 UTCThe best part of this story, as I said before, is the subtle nature of the changes. As we read it from Ashley's viewpoint, we don't even realize her change in attitude from anger to guilt is manufactured by Grant. Very well done.
Mike K
2017-05-21 11:18:18 +0000 UTC
