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Kevin the Bored
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Time Enough to Rule, Act I: The Devil of Audacity

"Magical Girl Sera-tan is here~~☆!!"

Sera

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....heheheheHAHAHAHA!!!! Oh sweet Big Red, the sheer chutzpah to call fucked ng Shiva out to the whole world. Glorious.

Orchamus

It's Time I read this. I wonder if the 'Time' thing will lead anywhere or if it's just a pun. I like the idea of inserting into the Agares clan. Usually a lot of attention is given to the Phenex monopoly on healing items, in light of Rias' match with Riser. But the Agaresite monopoly is just as significant, and would indeed yield significant leverage in devil politics. I also like that she derailed the Canon events proactively. Not sure about Tiamat having boosted gear though, it feels like it'd be quite awkward for both of them. The only real issue I have with glaze fics like this is that if a random SI can get this strong with just some hard work and elbow grease -- is everyone else in the setting just too dumb to do the same? Especially since she's been able to apply her special sauce to her peerage, it really feels like you're automatically bashing all the other characters in the setting for being too dumb to do the same. This kind of breaks the SoD for me because I don't enjoy worldbuilding where the MC is smart because everyone else is retarded.

foo-jin


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