CMSN: Gothless
Added 2023-11-18 17:35:15 +0000 UTCThanks to Dragoncanalove for commissioning this story!
The pitch was for a story focusing on a tomboy goth girl being stepfordized, first physically and then mentally, after entering a Stepford-like town. I decided to set the story in the Pacific Northwest simply because I like the idea that these towns like Stepford are all over the country, just in random areas. There's one in Oregon, in New York, in Texas and Arkansas and Utah and, obviously, Connecticut. There are as many of them as you could possibly need when writing stories!
It was also fun to do a Stepfordization that starts physically, before becoming mental at the end. It gives the character more time to react to what they'll spend the rest of their life looking like, and more time to be promptly disgusted and horrified.
Comments
Thanks!
Smokey
2023-11-19 13:19:06 +0000 UTCI think I caught an episode or two once, but I believe I've seen some art of the character you mention!
Smokey
2023-11-19 13:18:53 +0000 UTCI don't know if you watch Venture Bros, but that description of a shirt with a skull and crossbones reminded me of the character Triana, who wears that exact shirt
Rohith Chandramouli
2023-11-19 05:23:08 +0000 UTCOmg, absolutely love this! Her Stepford outfit is the perfect opposite of her real look, and that time delay really lets her feel the change. So great
vasily26
2023-11-18 22:56:28 +0000 UTC