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4.1 - The Decision [T1]

Soccer Supremo 4

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You broke my heart, Ted. When I saw Max was passing through Belgium… and then Bruges… to then dump Club Bruges for USG… from bliss to horror in a few paragraphs. Love the books though, thanks for everything!

HansVanakenIsMagic

I don't know how much heartstring tugging I can take, Ted. You're wearing me out.

BelligerentGnu

Thanks, Ted. Hope you pass your medical. Kevin De Bruin, plays hockey for Boston?

Richard Carling

This is an incredibly well weaved story. I’m rereading PM and just got to 10.11. It’s a chapter where max is on sumos stream and they specifically talk about hearts being somewhere max might go to… well done Ted!

YakoDune

Vimsy getting a shot to be the main man! That makes me super happy. Always been a great side character and was kinda bummed when he went with Jackie but def understood he’s not on the bench in the prem. Prediction - Jackie to Hearts because there’s no way Max is going Saudi

YakoDune

If only Hearts had been the club that kicked him out of the champions league. Then Max could have had his own version of Kevin Durant’s ‘hardest road’ when he switches teams.

Riekko

C'est magnifique

Peculiar Oranges

Fixed, thanks!

Ted Steel

The idea of max swanning around Europe like reverse Santa, delivering thrashings to teams who have been naughty, is very funny to me

hercule pyro

Set to be an emotional rollercoaster with Anna this volume, I see.

Droman

Gotta love side quests

Brandon Baier

I love Max in theory, but the idea of being stuck in a car with him for a trans-Europe road trip is terrifying. Still, chapter had me laughing throughout, thanks! Edit Suggestion: I imagine it being quiet, punctuating by sips of tea -- punctuating -> punctuated

Tareq Malikyar

Could be that I'm starved after going soooo long without a "proper" chapter, but this one was gold! The ending made me crack up. :)

HN

You certainly wind me up whenever Emma covers her wine glass. Great chapter.

Thomas

You started the book with a coffin pun scene I’m still trying to decide which punctuation to end that sentence with.

Caerold


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