3.5 - Engagement [T1]
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Also in my head John Liner is played by Johnny Vegas.
BelligerentGnu
2025-10-28 02:37:55 +0000 UTCThat was so much fun and so sweet.
BelligerentGnu
2025-10-28 02:15:51 +0000 UTCHa that's amazing!
Ted Steel
2025-08-25 18:36:22 +0000 UTCThis story has pushed Chester FC Google alerts to my feed :-D (Apparently, Alfie just received a red card....)
Isaac Dahl
2025-08-25 14:48:05 +0000 UTCThanks for the great chappie!
JaegerMaxim
2025-08-24 09:57:29 +0000 UTCHa! I tried to get into the headspace of 'mate this is as pure as the driven snow, nothing to see here'
Ted Steel
2025-08-22 23:01:50 +0000 UTCI loved how you brought us up to speed on how a lot of the characters who’d moved one or hasn’t seen much screen time recently are doing
Caerold
2025-08-22 22:48:31 +0000 UTCWe are so back! Max is so shameless explaining why he stole half their players lol
Matty
2025-08-22 22:31:11 +0000 UTCLmao at first words. Surely he’s heard it enough
Caerold
2025-08-22 22:23:05 +0000 UTC"the very grass of this green earth" - earth or Earth? I prefer this chapter to the last one, but tastes differ, and the variety is best of all things. (Thanks for the stand-up) (bar the safety certificate)
Richard Carling
2025-08-22 21:09:53 +0000 UTCOther than Max's use of "bro" making me instantly on edge, maxterful.
Galeg
2025-08-22 20:11:08 +0000 UTC'Did you make her?' 'No, she wanted to.' It's the theme of terrible jokes. Soz.
Ted Steel
2025-08-22 19:00:48 +0000 UTCNo he's saying Tranmere are awful this season.
Ted Steel
2025-08-22 19:00:24 +0000 UTCGreat chapter as usual, I love the Max shenanigans. I don’t get the Jamaica reference at the end there with Zach, anyone know the context?
Ed H
2025-08-22 18:49:00 +0000 UTCMate," I said, seriously. "I could leave you on for twenty minutes and everyone else could play the worst games of their careers and we would still be better than Tranmere." I patted him a few times. "This is gonna be legendary." Wrexham
Ricky Kukowski
2025-08-22 18:33:32 +0000 UTCWoo, Chester football is back! Not sure if Max should be advertising his schemes to keep cameras out of the locker room in a taped session that will surely be posted. Thanks for the chapter, and have a great weekend! Edit suggestions: Gabby's a Eurostar... It's -- It's -> it's (based on how you've handled other ellipses) but Joe being Joe he had mixed in some reggae deep cuts. -- this clause reads awkwardly to me. Maybe something like "but Joe, being Joe, had mixed in some reggae deep cuts."?
Tareq Malikyar
2025-08-22 13:30:53 +0000 UTCYay! TYFTC!
Kanyau
2025-08-22 12:43:30 +0000 UTC
