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13.4 - Here Kitty, Kitty

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Football glossary: Transfer

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Ah, someone else told me about that but I didn't fix it right away and it slipped out of mind. I've tweaked it now. Thanks a lot!

Ted Steel

still living a horror movie in my head. Had Camila met Chip Star at some fashion show one day? this no longer makes sense with the retcon.

Ricky Kukowski

Hope everything goes smoothly for Chester from here.

Ductor Storage

Great chapter, Ted. Always love it when a new one comes out :)

Sam McGuffin

I'll try to improve it but that precision ruins the flow!

Ted Steel

Triple take at the end when we realise it is Aff. Then not. Dugdale canned his agent. That's more money!

Richard Carling

Great chapter - and if Bradford come knocking I reckon they’ll get shot down by Lady Caramel. It feels like things are finally falling into place for Chester, and I don’t see anything slowing them down (or at least, that’s my hope). The team is getting ready for the Championship, and I think the jeopardy will come trying to ensure that the club/infrastructure can keep pace

BrownTown32

I had to look up gobby. Also, if 3 goalies is 100% of what you need, then each goalie is 33%, so when you have 4 goalies then you have 133% of what you need, or 33% more than you need. I dunno, I guess it's semantics, not math. It's clear what's meant either way.

GuyWhoReadsALot

Love the quick glimpse into 5d mental games with angel!

Chris Memmott

This line may need an edit: "I very nearly laughed. You could slap all your stuff in a rental van and move cross-country for five hundred quid. What was the other twenty-five grand for?" there would be 29.5 grand left, not 25, right?

Tyler Jansen

Max got his redhead and Angel is going to have green all over her profile and holy crap that's an amazing women's team and we haven't even seen Meredith yet and Jackie's biggest problem is going to be finding players to do play and train when the ENTIRE freaking squad is called up to their national teams. LET'S GOOOOOOOOOOOO!

Geoff Urland

I spell grammar, grammer, but if a person is strict about it they are a grammarian, or if I am feeling punny a gram-aryan.

Thomas


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