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8.3 - Leave No Man Behind

3.

Tuesday, May 14

Exit Trials D

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I’ve just had the time to catch up and this brought tears to my eyes.

phine_as

Appreciate all the hard work, please don’t stress yourself too much rushing it out

Logan Cole Adams

Still waiting 🤞

VaibhaV gupta

Few more hours!

Ted Steel

Monday chapter? Withdraw symptoms!

LLac

He's actually had two pay rises under Max but was so crazily underpaid when we met him.

Ted Steel

Phenomenal as always. The one thing that stuck out to me the was when Max was talking about the new contracts for his current players. Aff's was one of the lower ones, which seemed weird because he's often portrayed as one of if not the most valuable players in Max's scheme, barring Max himself of course.

Rhys Rathbun

I’m not crying. You’re crying.

K

Bloody hell Ted, You caught me right in the feels with this one. Bloody stellar chap.

Matthew The Bread Smith

Fucking tears in my eyes at the end there

Viktor Nilsson

Spot on with “bless your heart”

Brandon Baier

Great chapter

Declan Pang

Perfect , as always

Andre Cote

Dammm i cried a bit.

LLac

Incredible chapter.

Vaughn Mortensen

Full John. The Brig is arresting in this chapter. I only hope that the real lives touched by football are treated a little more gently because of this. The FA and Player's Association have a duty of care. Clubs should be measured by their treatment of "released" players.

Richard Carling

I read this and then I hugged my kids.

Geoff Urland

Holy shit dude, think there's something in my eye

Jake Lewis

This chapter is every bit as good as Dani's introduction chapter, and I do not say that lightly. Brig, it's been awhile. But you still steal the show.

BelligerentGnu

Forget full Max, this chapter was full Ted. Fuck me mate, this hit a lot harder than anticipated.

Felix Skinner

This is some of the good stuff

Daniel Tabask

Thanks for the chapter 🙏

Naffyg

Loved this one, and the Brig is such a great character. The bits in Italics sprinkled throughout about one of the exit trial lads culminated so well. Can’t wait to see who they managed to save.

Thomas Christie

Great chapter ted cutest cliffhanger ever <3

James Probert

Thanks for your support!

Ted Steel