Sharing the Nation Chapter s 33 & 34 up on FimFiction.net
Added 2024-12-25 12:09:17 +0000 UTCMerry Christmas everyone!
I'm... relatively happy with these chapters, though there's a lot of Star Glister rushing through things, which isn't ideal. That's one of the reasons I've been putting it off, really, but I don't think there's a way to fix it without actually going back and changing things. Honestly, I so, so very much feel like Sharing the Nation should have been split into separate stories for Twilight and Spike, but, well, rewrites never go well—which is a nice way of saying they kill projects. I'd want to have a full outline for it before I did anything... though then I'd be tempted to touch up the first third of Sharing the Night, too, which... yeah. Don't expect that to happen.
If anyone has any comments on the direction that Sharing the Nation has been going, though, let me know!
