Sunset Shimmer: Crumple-Horned Snorkack Chapter 6 & Deleted Scene
Added 2024-06-30 22:42:55 +0000 UTCGinny kind of saved this one, breaking up the usual Diagon Alley shopping trip with her exposition and shenaniganry. I'm not gonna lie; my original plan was not great for her, but I did say I wouldn't be engaging in bashing and the usual treatment she gets is perilously close, so I guess I can only do something different.
Anyway! In addition to the chapter, I've also included a 1,000 word deleted scene that I took way too long to realize was not the direction the story should go in. I like it and the scene it's taken from clearly suffers from it's absence, but it's just not a box of worms I want to open. Don't worry if you don't like reading on GoogleDocs, though; I'll be posting it on my snippets story on FimFiction at the same time as the chapter.
Comments
I love Luna’s moon logic. She was a great side character in the original series and you’re doing her justice. Everyone here feels like unique and independent characters, and that’s also very impressive.
pomegranate horsie
2024-06-30 23:46:19 +0000 UTC
