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The Gamble King - Chapter 01. A Series Of Unfortunate Events

"Grandfather?"

"Yes?"

"What does it

The Gamble King - Chapter 01. A Series Of Unfortunate Events

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Foreshadowing the ending of this novel?

Pseudo

I love this. One of the thing that I generally don't like about web novels is how short the chapters are (idk if this is normal maybe I'm a freak). I recognize that this is probably unsustainably long, but I really enjoyed the opening chapter and will definitely be reading the rest of the story.

Andrew Burgess

Pretty good start. At first I thought I dunno this highly relatable dude in the start is well written but maybe too real which is kind of heavy. So I was wishing it was a shorter intro. And thinking comments to an author would be very different than comments tona Chronicler. Like you can rewrite something to be cool way easier than you can re-write what happened in an actual battle. Also seems risky to change time when things seem to have worked out to kill the big bad. And pretty soon I was laughing at the thieves and already hooked on the time loop. So this must be what it feels like when the drug dealer gives your your first hit free and you know your hooked.

R. Maxwell Steele

Chapter dumps indeed

Ace_the_owl

Could've been chapter dumps

ThePickleBoss

Max sighed deeply and shut off his phone. He blinked several times as his eyes adjusted from the bright screen to the dimly lit subway car. So this was how it ended, huh. After fourteen years, 9,847 chapters, and countless hours hunched over screens in bedrooms, libraries, and subway cars just like this one, "The Chronicles of Bjorn: Warrior of the Northern Realms" had concluded. So 2 chapters a day every day?

Scion


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