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Bryt's Home Cumming #4 of 5

Hmmm. Too many sound effects?

It read okay to me but I've been working a while. It might not read as well tomorrow.

Bryt's Home Cumming #4 of 5

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were do i even ffhuking start!?... every shot of brit's face is an absolute treat, and her tail has better animation than most WHOLE SHOWS currently airing on tv! the attention to detail on things like her hair & ears, and both their fur patterns & muscle tone is the stuff of legend! at no point does the dialog come off as "generic" or anything like it, as someone that has read GD since i was a kid all i hear in this is their voices. in just about any other scene, the number of sound effects use'd here would be annoyingly over done. but her energetic attitude and his willingness to participate on a near equal level make it work. then there's the positions, that first shot is just... can i save this as my reference for how i want to die?... and that flip at the bottom, hot damn!(never seen the hand restraint done so well) the icing on top is the soft glow they seem to have that i can't really explain... now the only question is if this will miraculously end on an upcoming romantic holiday? with that said, if you will excuse me, i'm gunna go be jealous of an alien tiger man.

jo holloway

I still imagine him saying, "I have you now." lol Such a great panel.

Daedrius Storm

To answer your question, Sir: No, I believe that, under the circumstances, the amount of sound effects used in this comic are definitely warranted. Excellent job on this page! Stryyp’s “Wrassle Fuck” hold is my favorite.

CharmedKameleon

Brit is one happy kitty right there.

MaveriKat


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