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Being Fiona 272

I really struggled to with Felix's explanation for why it would be bad for him to say yes to Riley, and how to keep it simple. I think I got it, but still not sure.

I mean, imagine that a female friend invites you to her private gym, and then one of her friends shows up and suggests a threesome. If your answer isn't a definite no, you let your friend answer first.

And then on top of that, because Felix is borrowing Jess' body, there's also all the issues around consent.

(Also given the 'roller-coaster' he's been on with all his female characters in VR, while Felix might be curious, he might be hesitant to jump into something like that in real life with Riley).

Anyhow, the last panel of this strip could technically make it a Red strip, but I think enough is covered that it should be okay. I might have to give them bras for the Webtoon version though.

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The eyes - and the smirk - were very telling!

Steve

I've seen you write about that, but forgot it. Went through the last few chapters again, and knowing that, it's fine. I think it will be easier to notice when binge-reading through the comic. In panels where Felix is in control, but looking into a mirror, the eyes are green in the mirror image. Is that to show things how he sees them?

patroen usre

Check her eyes (although I could add a speech bubble tail for the one in control)

From the Files of Robin Harper

With internal speech bubbles for both, it's not clear who's controlling the body right now.

patroen usre

I think you got it - at this point Felix must still feel like a guest who doesn't really have much say in what happens - as he mentions, he is doing this for a simple meeting with Lisa. Hopping into bed with Riley would seem way out of bounds, no matter how enticing it would also be, unless Jess gave the okay.

stevedore

Typo panel 272.3: she defintely is -> definitely

Disbet

It makes sense *thumbs up*

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