Garbenor and commission WIPs 7
Added 2020-05-14 20:42:42 +0000 UTCHello everyone, stay safe.
For this week Garbenor, finally an action position and a WIP of the introduction of the commission, we hope you enjoy it, sorry if the results have some inconsistencies, we still need to get more used to the new tools. As always thanks for the comments.
Garbenor
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1NDbAo0gWheFn1GDSTDargNaPEg6bbXcA/view?usp=sharing
Ash commission
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1QAYW188FEl43-RuvRqZs07dVa8ZTjn9r/view?usp=sharing
Comments
We are glad that you like it and you are right, "strongest" its a better dialogue
2020-05-21 19:21:09 +0000 UTCThe quick Garbenor bit looks hot. For Ash, the line "Because you are the most strong full", could be better edited to "strongest" or "most strong". Looking forward to more.
Bud Chudley
2020-05-17 00:01:51 +0000 UTC
