Janet the White Draft 2
Added 2017-09-11 13:02:44 +0000 UTCI've been working on Abigail the Green for the last month. It's looking to be nearly as long Janet however there isn't as clear a midpoint yet. I'm going to shuffle around some scenes and rewrite some more before I post it in halves like I did with Janet a few months ago. This definitely won't delay Blue Ribbon on the 25th. As I've already charged for Janet this is non-paid post. If you read the original there are only a few story-telling changes to this version. Queen Fisher speaks in this iteration.
I'm looking forward to getting through the first three stories, the origin story of sorts. There's a lot more mind control and cleverer monsters to come.
