166: Nap
Added 2026-02-07 19:57:57 +0000 UTCComments
I don't know why but it feels like he is bending over backwards for everyone. Also, Crisplet can't sense his general direction? I've always that was part and parcel of familiars.
Caleb Reusser
2026-02-14 00:57:41 +0000 UTCI kinda of hope he doesn't go to the dinner now. If he doesn't want to be apart of these games he needs to show he will follow through with what he says, but other hand he said you not your house, but implied house
Hammy
2026-02-07 23:00:03 +0000 UTCAs I am getting older (In my 40's haha) naps are so important, nothing better than a shaded tree on a warm day, you get those moments when the breeze moves the leaves and the sun kisses your skin giving that burst of warmth then to feel coolness of the shade returning. Add some spiked homemade lemonade you get an extremely lazy Metafy. Thanks for the chapter BTW ;)
Metafy
2026-02-07 21:43:13 +0000 UTCThey did ask as soon as she showed up, finding lily is rarely so easy for anyone except Trev to be clear. And honestly I think the reaction is justified and it'll be made clearer soon this is one of those situations where webserial vs book is happening, in a book sense you'll see
T J Ward
2026-02-07 21:24:33 +0000 UTCTyftc
Jaklelope
2026-02-07 21:02:03 +0000 UTCDang, seems like a crazy overreaction for just a bit of a nap. Earlier they were just telling him he was 16 too. They should have asked Lily where he was right away instead of blowing up.
Joe
2026-02-07 20:58:11 +0000 UTCNapping under a tree is safe for him since he is immune to poisons (bugs), I did feel this chapter was a little boring in ways and dang that meeting was way to fast
Slashman1
2026-02-07 20:43:52 +0000 UTCThis crossed my mind with the candy, or confirming the buffs, especially since Trev has decided to be open about it; however, Trev would have still been rattled by the nap situation, and the taps by Lily are no joke, even with little to no power :) It crossed my mind to add a damage notification, but when I wrote it out, I felt it detracted from the scene, so I removed it.
T J Ward
2026-02-07 20:29:20 +0000 UTCI totally get that napping under a tree with just the right amount of sun... its great π Bit stupid not telling anyone but i rly get it ^^ Also i rly had hoped he whould have give the princess a candy or a drink he made just to confirm before the meeting the stuff with the buffs
Caiban
2026-02-07 20:26:19 +0000 UTC
