154: Seed
Added 2026-01-22 20:04:42 +0000 UTCComments
Thank you for the chapter! A dragon's presence at his shop will ensure noone to messes with it, nice touch!
Metafy
2026-01-22 22:58:03 +0000 UTCThere is lots of training that needs to happen we'll be in the capital for a while (for those who love the adventure and you're reading this, don't worry I'm not forgetting you <3 )
T J Ward
2026-01-22 20:34:11 +0000 UTCUnless you plan on extending the capital stay beyond a few "nobel" gatherings, maybe put this closer to leaving. Im not opposed to seeing him get & use his butcher building, & see Micca settle in.. honestly, there's so much storytelling that could happen here, you've left so many threads to tug!
Crystal Petrosky
2026-01-22 20:32:09 +0000 UTCTyftc
Jaklelope
2026-01-22 20:29:44 +0000 UTCSeems like this would be better placed close to when he is already going to leave to usher him out of the city, depending on what you're trying to do with it.
Powernap
2026-01-22 20:22:26 +0000 UTCA small note for this one - I am not convinced this is the right place for this as while I was editing it felt to soon to the start of the book, I won't be cutting it entire, but I'm seeking your opinions on it.
T J Ward
2026-01-22 20:06:41 +0000 UTC
