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Critique my ebook cover!

Please tell me anything you think is wrong with, or that you don't like about my ebook cover image. Better I know now than later. Feel free to be direct and harsh if necessary.

I want to get this story up in a store by the end of the month. Now is the time to get it nicely polished!

If you haven't read the story, it's here on the archive. I think I'll have to take it off the archive due to the way it's going to be licensed for sale, so take advantage of it now. :)

The ebook version will have some bonus content and several more editing passes for polish than the current version.

Critique my ebook cover!

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Sent! <3

Sure send them over along with any alternatives or general thoughts for the cover.

Go for it. :D I can send you the model photo, or I have some alternatives since I had several people tell me that the image doesn't go well with the tone of the book.

The blue feels clashy with the color of the stock photo. And the word art font doesn’t really go either. Happy to put together an alternative if you’d like!

When do you plan to launch?

I'd like to do that, yes. Maybe for the ebook launch. 😸

Any idea if you are going to crossover Roommate with Monchi of one your other connected stories?

Hmm, I'll play with the text in Illustrator and see what that looks like. Thanks for the suggestion!

I'd lay it out a bit more like this https://imgur.com/a/YDFTcVg .It fits more with the expected layout, and makes it a bit more readable at a glance? Fonts I used were Familiar Pro and Desyrel.

It's going up on Amazon. Kindle Unlimited. Legally it's fine. I own the license to the model image and all that. I'm looking for feedback on anything that doesn't look good, seems like a mistake, or is otherwise badly done. People absolutely judge books by their cover, and I want mine to make a good impression.

Where are you going to sell it to? What service? I don’t think there is anything wrong with it legally or anything.


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