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Test Video 2.

This is the more conversational style.

Comments

Personally I felt more engaged during the converstional style vid, you had more eye contact, it flowed better, and you looked more at ease. That's all important when coming across with true crime. Plus you get to add your own personality. All good things plus you aren't as rigid.

Rofaren

I preferred scripted, but if we’re seeing you , as others said, I think you need to be looking at the camera for it to be less awkward. Secondly, I think you could find a middle happy in the tonality of the two. Scripted, but be loose with it (?) if that makes sense. The script is easier to follow but if I’m seeing you read it out in person, it feels more stiff than usual.

Marie

I think you do a fantastic job off-script, so I voted for this one. If you do read from the script, I'd suggest placing it close to the camera so it looks like you're looking at the viewer.

Maren Lisac

I enjoy any content you present & any way you present it, but because I know you’re seeking an opinion on style i choose style # 2… im sure anything you post will be amazing no matter the format!! good luck🍀

Karli Sementa

After having watched both, I prefer this one. It flows well and feels natural. There is also more context provided about the perpetrator; evading jail time as a result of reference letters vouching for him. I feel like this sets the tone for the video.

Lady_Chatterly

I prefer the conversational number 2. It’s personal, natural and engaging. Number one is what we’re familiar with, your usual polished story telling style but reading from script could create a disconnect from you and could be distracting. I guess it depends on how people watch vs listen on the go. Regardless, I think people will love the big reveal, especially in the age of AI. Your followers are loyal and passionate about you as a creator and not just here for another true crime video. (I said just! 😂) Hope you get a good response, good luck in whatever you decide. Donna

DMR

Like this style--always love to see you Dave!

Worried Mary

OMG he's not AI

Miranda Stone

Ooooooo ok this is different but I actually really like it. Your cadence is more casual and relaxed but you still maintain that calm pace that makes your style so enjoyable.

Chantal Harris

im shocked

GurneyHallock

❤️

Miranda Stone


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