The Alpha Next Door
Added 2022-10-09 23:02:18 +0000 UTC
Rating: Explicit, ABO, Alp
Comments
Yeah, Lena should probably be a little more careful... π
2022-11-12 12:19:39 +0000 UTCNo birth control while in heat? Okay then, everyone, please drop baby name suggestions in the ballot box π³
2022-11-06 14:01:46 +0000 UTCThis one had the potential to touch on serious topics, and I would explore that a bit more in a sequel, but I wanted to keep it on the lighter comedic side, especially since it's a one-shot right now -- soo comedy and smut, yes. Now you've got me wanting to write another season 5 AU. π I need to finish The Best of Both Worlds first though. I still wish we had gotten Supercorp. π Thank you!!! I hope everything in your life is wonderful, too! πβ€οΈβΊοΈ
2022-10-17 19:50:17 +0000 UTCThis was pure gold perfect balance of comedy and smut I really enjoyed the whole thing. The dynamics in this were well executed. The way both Kara and Lena gave into their desires. This really reminded me of season 5 SuperCorp with Lena wanting nothing to do with Kara. Only for Kara to eventually break down her walls. If only we had gotten a passionate and lustful reunion as the one you wonderfully wrote. Oh well thatβs what talented fanfic writers are for. Excellent story thank you for writing it. Hope you are doing amazing and all is good π β€οΈπππ»ππ»π€©
2022-10-17 00:06:27 +0000 UTCI can definitely think of lots of things that could happen in a sequel. Wah, I want to write everything. βΉοΈπ
2022-10-16 18:45:21 +0000 UTCThank you! βΊοΈ
2022-10-16 18:44:35 +0000 UTCI'm open to writing more and I will add it to the upcoming continuation poll! I felt like the story could have been much longer, especially since I didn't get to do as much as I would have liked with Ruby, Sam & Alex. There would be a lot to add if this becomes a continued story -- many, many options! Thank you so much!! βΊοΈπ
2022-10-16 18:43:57 +0000 UTCShe really doesn't. π I basically slapped Lena + Saskia together and created a cursing anti-alpha hero. Lena and Sam make good co-parents - and it's a dynamic I wouldn't mind fleshing out more. Love at first mace. π Thank you, and I'm happy it helped - and I hope your week improved!
2022-10-16 18:42:01 +0000 UTCI have like zero patience irl lol. So any unresolved angst or cliffhangers just make me want to binge read a whole series. I just like happy endings!
2022-10-16 16:48:36 +0000 UTCIn the interest of keeping a lighter tone to the story, I excluded giving details on Lena's hatred and distrust, and instead focused on making it funny and sexy. Though I could definitely write the hell out of a fic with more layers if requested. I also would have liked to feature Sam and Alex's relationship more, but as it came together, I realized there wasn't enough space to do it in a one-shot of reasonable length. βΉοΈ But it would fun to continue this one (if people vote for it) and explore how they all become a family.
2022-10-16 16:02:09 +0000 UTCI take it you haven't been enjoying the cliffhangers on some of them? π Thank you! I'm glad you liked this!
2022-10-16 15:59:14 +0000 UTCYou have no idea how much I wish I could write a second part to most of the fics (at least the ones with room for more development). I will definitely put this on the next continuation poll. All of these characters probably have a lot of trauma in their past and can heal each other.
2022-10-16 15:58:43 +0000 UTCWith mouthy Lena as her mom, oh yeah. Thank you! π
2022-10-16 15:56:52 +0000 UTCThank you! βΊοΈ
2022-10-16 15:56:13 +0000 UTCAs itβs sweet
GrouchyGritic
2022-10-15 18:02:17 +0000 UTCNOOOOOOOOOOOOO I NEED A SEQUEL π It nearly hurt to realize I reached the end of the story.
2022-10-15 02:29:15 +0000 UTCOmg I love this! I would love to see this as a series. So many options! Sam getting jealous that Kara is taking Lena away from their lil family. Lena getting jealous of Alex taking Sam and Ruby. Ruby going through her feelings about losing all the attention of both her mom's to alphas whom she's been taught all her life are not to be trusted. You could do so much with this and I'd love literally any storyline you chose bc you're just that good.
2022-10-14 14:22:16 +0000 UTCOofa Lena doesnβt hold back here! Love the idea of Lena and Sam co-parenting just about as much as i love the image of Kara moving and entire fridge by herself π. I did REALLY love Kara being so frank in the car βoh so THIS is why you hate me ok coolβ. Love at first mace you love to see it lol. Just what I needed after a rough start to the week!
Rocket
2022-10-12 05:21:25 +0000 UTCThat was great. I did want a little more elaboration on why Lena hates and distrusts maybe with a certain ex and I also kind of wanted Kara to be like "Wow whats your damage to hate me?" But then it wouldn't be the Kara we all know and love. I would love a chapter 2 but mainly for Sam, Ruby and Alex. It wouldn't even need to be explicit I'd just like to see Sams story and how they because a family unit together.
2022-10-10 13:12:31 +0000 UTCYay! Great story with no cliffhangers and a happy ending! Thank you π!
2022-10-10 09:14:11 +0000 UTCWeβre going to get a chapter 2 RIGHT?!? So many things to explore!! Lenaβs walls crumbling, Sam and Alex!! I can also see Kara having a lot of bad luck with omegas while she was young thus sharing experience with Sam and Lena to break the stereotypes
2022-10-10 06:34:29 +0000 UTCRuby is so precocious! Thanks for sharing ;)
2022-10-10 00:07:50 +0000 UTCLOVED
Kirstin Leigh McWhorter
2022-10-09 23:18:13 +0000 UTC