The Subordinate Ch. 5
Added 2025-05-03 12:13:20 +0000 UTCAfter a short delay, it's back - and meaner than ever! Picking up from the previous chapter, Olive rushes home in a moment of lucidity to keep her girlfriend Luna from crossing the Rubicon with Ivy... but can her newfound conviction withstand Ivy's presence? And more importantly, is Luna still the sweet, innocent girl Olive once knew her as?
I had a ton of fun getting back into the groove of this story. Enjoy! And thank you to Brendon for commissioning this chapter
Comments
I hope it continues to take root :3
Kallie
2025-05-31 15:04:12 +0000 UTCReading Ntr from the viewpoint of the cucked while I'm depressed, recovering from a hungover and to top things of, at work it's like giving a gun to a teenager. I love NTR I've always loved it, I usually emphatisize more with the viewpoint of the adulterer, and so I would have loved if Luna's perversion had more protagonism, but having this terrible story explained so thoughtfully really tears me apart in the most beautiful way. Poor little Olive
WhoreHound
2025-05-31 13:34:19 +0000 UTCI've found it much the same writing it! It's really fun to be able to write a trans woman in a role like this, it really inspires me
Kallie
2025-05-18 01:01:48 +0000 UTC"“Good,” Ivy interrupts. “Really, it’s a shame you couldn’t be here.” Another twitch.. And I notice that Luna is beginning to turn a deep shade of red." made my head do a very funny, I couldnt decide if I was close to gagging or crying. I think the scary part is that it spoke to that little part of my brain that doesnt trust anyone, that thinks that im...inferior, that my partners would rather have sex with people other than me but just dont want to admit it. tho halfway through I found it strangely powerful that Ivy is a trans woman haha.
Madison S.
2025-05-17 23:23:36 +0000 UTC
