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Early Access: STORMWEAVER 3 - Chapter 36 [ROUGH]

Testing the ending to this one. I actually planned another section, but I thought this might have a better read-through hook, so I'll see wh

Testing the ending to this one. I actually planned another section, but I thought this might have a better read-through hook, so I'll see when I do my reread tomorrow morning!

There's some GOOD stuff in this one, and some important action coming on next post! Enjoy!

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NEW REMINDER: BOOK 3 CONTENT/SPOILERS ARE NOT TO BE MENTIONED OUTSIDE OF CHAPTER LEAK ANNOUNCEMENT POSTS. THANK YOU FOR UNDERSTANDING.

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A FEW RULES & REMINDERS:

Comments

Nice expansion on the initial chapter. I especially enjoy Catchers reaction to the change, it fits the character to be both elated and stressed by the change that has happened and what it means for the future. This reaction is fitting as he has been shown as both the most thoughtful and knowledgeable (with the possible exception of Rei) of all members of Fire Song as well a being the clown and most socially empathic of the team. These two roles show a character that is more thoughtful and contemplative than has been shown to others. Only Chancery seems to have noticed this in the previous book. I look forward to future evolutions of all members of Fire Song as it appears they are being tuned to each individuals needs, personality, weaknesses and "job" within the team dynamic. I will be intrigued to find out what his HUD shows when in battle Thanks and look forward to future chapters and the continuing and evolving story EDIT: Had a thought after posting, I wonder if Shido's "benefits" will also include others that are allied and present within the CAD range of influence. It would be interesting if it influenced those outside of the team, if not to as great an extent.

Mike Gilbert

Catcher is so real for barfing here tbh

Genevieve Dickinson

Some things it seems like we should be looking forward to soon. 1. Sarah making herself known! 2. Grant gaining a skill or major evolution. Do we know his eventual name yet? I can’t remember. 3. First year interstystem being publicly announced ( other teams reactions?). It seems like this has to happen fairly soon. 4. Others finding out about firesong sponsors. 5. Siderov doing something unpleasant Exciting stuff!

Scott

Yes, he went up from 6 to 5. It’s the new math. :)

Scott

❤️ 😍

Dee

I always guessed it was in relation to her grandfather for keeping this a secret from her. It being Rei would have been a bit confusing but not impossible. And for her father I don't know why you'd not also be mad at her mother.

Voror

I see a lot of comments about Sarah. Any thoughts yet on who Sarah was gonna kill? Catcher just couldn't wait for the others like some certain white-haired guy... I don't blame him... not one bit. Happy for Catcher!

K.Impossible

I haven't received any postcard yet.

Marie H

General? Pretty sure Selleck is talking to Sidorov.

Sam

Selleck is sooo gonna get his face rearranged and won’t even see it coming… some ppl never learn until it hurts like hell… smh Damn you General… you’ve got it coming too… I’m betting it’ll be the capn

Xien

I’m wondering if there are other special ‘S’ stat CAD’s that interact with others in similar ways.

Daniel Bellick

I like what we’re seeing so far. I’m giving what we have another read through. I’m going to tech on chapter 36 so I can get a full picture of what’s really happening. I haven’t quite absorbed catchers or reaction yet, so I’m going to have to reread that again. And I did not get where Celic was talking to sitter off. I thought he was talking to someone like Abel or someone like that. I might’ve missed something though.

Tim Kilgore

Go down and still calling it an update is weird tho. Might be a typo somewhere in there

JustOneEmperor

I'm looking forward to Sarah giving Sidorov the smackdown. Can't wait to see how much extra heft his sword lands with Ruinous as well.

Matt O'Connor

Is it just me or did Catchwick's rank go down 1, not up? Great chapter though. I really enjoyed his reactions and cant wait to see him get some more props. He deserves it. And we just know a slug like Selleck is talking to Sidorov. May they both get a good kicking in upcoming chapters. Edit: I'd given the new nickname, I'd love it to come from breaking/beating a "King" or "Queen", like say, Sidorov towards the end of their second year, doing to him what he couldn't do to Lennon. Which given his crown... or maybe once they are all beyond Bishop class he takes down a literal S-Ranked King class and is finally not just called Catchwick in his match ups after years of not having a nickname.

Matt O'Connor

Loved this! Great seeing the response from Catcher to his evolution and growth with the apprehension and implications of what this means for them all. I was going back and forth with his C5 evolution (quite stunned that his last one came only one rank up ago!) to see all the changes and not sure they fit? I could have been reading it wrong but it sounded like Catcher had armour up to his hips for lower body and then both forearms plus his right arm and the right side of his chest (ch.25 p485). Then in this chapter it is all of a sudden on his left chest and both arms already? Sorry to sound picky, I just tend to always compare back when I can as love visualising the changes! Also interesting to see that only one rank change since sectionals, was wondering how the rest of the group was comparing to Rei's 5 ranks since sectionals (a week on light duty as well) so guess the others have also only had one/will have one soon going by this :D

Jaxon King

Oooo interesting thought. That said, there was mention that the earth based schools had first years well above the typical average. Intersystems might be enough of a challenge, especially when intersystems for 2nd years would be high Bs and low A. Who knows tho, cool thought

Zwil

Very good chapter but I so wanted more about Rei’s sister.

Gale S. - Colorado

I saw a bit ago you said postcards from January or Feb were going out but haven’t received mine yet. Is it all done now and should everyone have received it by now or are you still shipping them out and some haven’t received them yet?

Travis

So….we’re gonna get a smack down of Sidorov next chapter right? Personally would love to see Sarah be the one to do it but I’m good with Rei mopping the floor with him too🤷🏼‍♂️

RickVaughn14

Thoughts from anyone: Seeing that all of Firesong is ranking up, getting stronger and looking like an unstoppable force. Do you think Abel and the top brass will decide to have first years (Firesong) compete alongside 2nd & 3rd years? I’m reading what everyones saying - if Rei and the rest of them are getting closer to 2nd year numbers quickly, I wouldn’t be surprised if there is an impossible announcement in order to push Rei/Firesong. ????

TDL

Oh man, they're going to give him SO much flak for the crown. Also his "rank up" made his rank go down?

Aubrey Listi

I keep thinking about that too. We don't know how good she is yet, though she did quite well at her Sectionals. It'd be funny if he gets outclassed there as well. Depending on how Sarah is with Rei that's also another connection Rei has that's a positive for him.

Voror

EEE 💜✨ so worth the wait !!! 😁 -j

Brandon and Jess Horton

Does his "crown" look like Darth mauls spikes right now?

Alexander

First off… Crownbreaker is very much along the lines I’d been predicting. And it’s a very solid name for sure! I’ve no doubt Catcher is gonna live up to that in spades… he’s got just enough madness to be unpredictable but textbook technique. Killer combo, definitely looking forward to his matches going forward!! The evolution is pretty damn good! I love the changes to his upper torso and pauldrons, sounds like he’s got some solid protection there, and the streamlining will help his speed I’m sure. The fact his longsword is so much broader too… and that’s all edge right? Holy. Shit. The crown is a nice touch, especially if he can weaponise it. Keen to see what his display does for him. Selleck is definitely speaking with Sidorov, who else would care who isn’t at least somewhat in the loop! Plus Rei is B4, maybe even B5, so will soon officially outrank Sidorov - and I wouldn’t put money on Sidorov at this point! Wouldn’t bet the house on Rei just yet either. Firesong heading out of Kanes like a herd of rampaging bulls seems about right! Can’t wait to see their reactions or those of the trainers, sparring partners, and instructors Sad we haven’t seen Sarah yet.

Iron Akela

Sidorov smh. He’s about to be outclassed by Sarah anyway. Just need to give up

Superior_Shaq

Jog my memory? Two upper-year assholes who have it out for Firesong for no reason other than jealousy and spite correct?

Polyist's Apostle

It was love at first fight…I mean sight!! That was hilarious BTW

Kory Leach

MAN, I love Catcher!

Todd Smith

Personally, I love reading the chapters serially. I tend to read then re-read them and get much more from each than I do when I read a complete book. I have a habit of rushing through books -- to see what happens next! -- and I'm enjoying the anticipation & deeper read. The forced delay between chapters helps me relish (and daydream about) each one more.

Todd Smith

I was really hoping the quote meant we’d finally get Sarah in the story.

Nahar

Booo Mateus booooooo

Kemlion

Not going to lie, I'm struggling with reading the chapters this way now. I feel...like the story is still good...but a) I'm starting to miss the small connections and b) I'm a little frustrated with the tease of his sister for so long without the pay off. I might have to just wait for the published book. It just feels disconnected to me amid all the other books and web novels I read. More a me thing.

NerdGinger

Crownbreaker is a pretty good name! Not sure who is being spoken of in that quote still, but I lean towards Sarah. Catcher is rather practical so I'm not surprised he reacted by puking as it hits him with the full implications of it all. I actually thought he'd be getting a new ability but it feels like the first major upgrades we're seeing with everyone is related with them developing films. Noticed that we didn't seem to get an indication on what his display involves given Rei and Viv's have different focuses in what they show. Improvement to his sword is good though hopefully doesn't take him too long to adjust. Should hopefully make his skill hit that much harder. I feel like de Soto is gonna be annoyed that he described that just as a speed boost even if he wasn't lying. Ok so basically the boost with Growth is that their stat will start gradually improving, which makes some sense. They didn't start out at near baseline with S Growth like Rei did so a gradual improvement to get their CADs accustomed should allow them to eventually reach that. Now just wonder who may be next. Logan is kind of the lone one out so far but he'd also already gotten a bit farther ahead. Rather than a new ability, hopefully we get a nice evolution for him. That has to be Sidorov that Marcus is informing to, but I'm not sure what he'd do with the information. Leak it to cause drama for Firesong? Sell it to other teams to give them a leg up on beating them? He's so ridiculously petty it seems like, but it fits. And we keep hinting towards Sarah. Looking forward to that reveal.

Voror

I'm SO glad Catcher acted more normal than Rei or Viv when they went through this. Finally someone has some sense.😂

Bea Mostert

So good! So we can guess who was recruited by a certain silver eyed antagonist to gather information.

Kory Leach

Gotta be Sidorov. Only thing i can think of. He’s mad at Rei and firesong stealing the spotlight and is gonna try to sabotage however he can

Zwil

CROWNBREAKER!!!!? Now that's a great name!!!!!

Wilsonkrom .

I love that catcher has a crown forming🤣 like he needed more of an ego boost. The (i’m guessing) Sidorov and Selleck team-up makes me wanna puke

Zwil

Very nice chapter👍

Dougie Mitchell

lololololololol there's an edit I would NEVER have caught lolol

Wraithmarked Creative

Great chapter! Really looking forward to the next one!

Maria Klein

Oh no catcher lost a rank! Great chapter. Cant imagine who that would be talking to Selleck since the majors gone now. Who wants the dirt on firesong these days?

Adam Vigil

> CAD “Arthus” has been upgraded from Rank C6 to C5. ... < Tough luck XD

Justus Wingert

"Testing the ending for read-through"... It's a spoiler ending almost certainly. Reading Stormweaver as (not intended) serial chapters is a trip. I'm going to love and hate this. Can't wait.

Joe Barzilai

also Crownbreaker is pretty cool

Jordan Clark

Haven't read this yet, but seeing it in my email brought a smile to my face :)

SF

LETS GOOOO

Jordan Clark


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