Community polling time! How would you rate STORMWEAVER 2 (out of 5 star) right now based on the current Early Access chapters?
Added 2023-02-27 15:00:20 +0000 UTCTitle says it all! Looking for thoughts from my core community!
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I gave a 4.5. I loved all of it but it took two books to get through the first year of school. Obviously, for anyone that reads the story it's understandable why. You put in alot of effort in putting in a lot of detail in the fighting and training scenes and physical description of characters. Especially of the CADS and the fighters abilities and looks. And the way you wrote it was amazing. You kept the balance between just enough detail to show the reader what your trying to convey without the reader getting lost in the details and not using enough detailed descriptions of people and events because your moving so fast that the readers get a disjointed feeling while reading the story. Not enough descriptive bridging words. I have ran across both problems and as I said before, you do a good job riding that descriptive writing fence. Like I said before, it's obvious why there are two books instead of one. And, I, personally can't see a way around the problem of taking two whole books to get completely through one year andthem into one book. There would definitely be a lot of cutting back. Sooo don't want that!!! But, then it's not me writing it. I'm just the one enjoying reading it. No matter how many books it takes to write your story. So that is why I gave a 4.5.
Nicole Hicks
2023-03-21 07:17:03 +0000 UTCI gave it a 4 because I LOVE the story and the premise of it. But I just don’t see how it will be done in 3 weeks (this is based on seeing posts that say it is due to the editor at the end of March).
Jason Williams
2023-03-10 03:49:46 +0000 UTC
