Housesitting v0.7.7
Added 2020-10-09 21:40:46 +0000 UTCIt's here. It's not complete; I had some trouble writing the landlady dialogue and had more work than I expected. Still, I hope you'll enjoy it, and we are nearly done with the fourth day now.
I'm not entirely happy with the new scenes, and the fourth day in general, so for those of you who are patient or only do a play-through every so often, I'd recommend waiting for v0.8.0.
Changelog:
- fixing loads of typos and errors
- finish "DAY04.SCENE03"
- add "DAY04.SCENE04"
- add "DAY04.SCENE05" (incomplete)
- work on the engine, you can find the changes here
v0.8.0 will mark the completion of the "prologue" of the story. The things I have left to do for it are:
- finish writing the day
- revise the entirety of day four
- add more scenes to the second route of the game
I hope you are looking forward to it, I don't know when I will finish writing it. I doubt it will be next week.
Comments
Well, 'unhappy', is relative. I only make releases when I'm decently contented with the content, but it's simply not up to my perfectionist-standards yet. What is your fanfiction about? I don't know what you're having trouble with, but my suggestion would be to not edit TOO much. Editing is boring, so when you come up with a good idea, just write it. Even if it is a scene not really connected to the story itself yet.
2020-10-11 21:46:23 +0000 UTCReally enjoying how the story is progressing, just wanted to say that I've noticed some weirdness with the landlord's in the writing where it will say "My the landlords wife" or "My the landlord" just wanted to let you know. Definitely take as much time as you need whilst writing, it will be more beneficial then if you were to feel the need to rush. I'm more than happy to wait :)
feelsbadman.inc
2020-10-11 03:57:26 +0000 UTCI am happy to wait. When the author is unhappy then there is something that not working out. Kinda like my fanfiction I have spent the last 5 months working on.
rglifer99
2020-10-10 04:05:15 +0000 UTC
