Brightshore Ch4 Pg10 WIP
Added 2023-07-27 20:11:19 +0000 UTCToday I have the draft work for page 10 of Chapter 4 I hope you like meeting back up with team Bernice.
Comments
Fantastic panelling as usual, Kobi! The flow of the panels still seem good so far, especially with how you did the last one. I like the choice of making Candy already leaving on the top left side in that way, not only because it shows time passing already in this panel, and that it being there then leads the eye towards Starr and what she says next, but it also gives you space in the first place to have Star and Chels posing with their cute "boobs-over-head bit" lol. You're getting better and better at this page flow stuff, bud! Keep it up!
PolkaToonZ
2023-07-28 00:20:21 +0000 UTCWould love to see Star reading the book and go "Hey Bernice, there's a chapter about you in here. It says..." And Bernice goes "NO WAIT!!" lolz
Linewalkr
2023-07-27 22:05:40 +0000 UTC
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