Brightshore Ch3 Pg19 WIP
Added 2023-04-27 19:30:05 +0000 UTCHey there~ I've got this week peek at Brightshore ready for you as Chels meets back up with Bernice before the action continues~ ^^
Comments
Mm I love Bernice, looking good with them jugs out
BioYuGi
2023-04-27 23:41:40 +0000 UTCThe fact Bernice mentions Blyand's magic makes me think Candy may have progressed along.
Juan Lopez
2023-04-27 21:08:29 +0000 UTCA lot of nice panels here, dude! I like that you added a little establishing shot in the first panel, of Bernice inside the hideout, but viewed via the window outside. I also like the lil character pose you did with Bernice in panel 4 leaning back on her chair, unintentionally showing off her breasts, and Chelsea's lil timid look of lying to her, on panel 2. the pose also causing a bit of tit squeeze, heh. I also like you attempted a lil use of perspective in panel 5, of Chelsea behind Bernice in space. Adds a lot to the experience. Great work so far, dude!
PolkaToonZ
2023-04-27 20:13:48 +0000 UTCCandy isn't here? Sus.
TheScottishFox
2023-04-27 19:47:45 +0000 UTCI still say Candy is a plant. Spellcheck for final version: First panel: affected, not effected Sadie and Candy names aren't capitalized in ink version.
DreamerDon
2023-04-27 19:42:48 +0000 UTCruh roh...have we been Deflected?
Toni-Technaclaw
2023-04-27 19:35:40 +0000 UTC
