Brightshore Pg9 WIP
Added 2022-03-11 19:55:49 +0000 UTCToday I'm happy to bring you my draft work for the next page of brightshore Ive been working on~ With a look at how Sara's mom ended up looking after these strange changes going around the city~ I hope you look forward to the color up~
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& from the context, it needs to be plural.
Masao
2022-03-12 01:10:35 +0000 UTCthis looks like a great place to be if you want to be a bimbo so how do i move there
Jagues
2022-03-11 21:22:27 +0000 UTC"Couldn't and That's" need to be corrected. Also forgot a comma between "wife" snd "she". Mother doesn't need to be capitalized. Also you might want to change the last sentence in the last speech bubble to make it sound a bit more grammatically correct.
phoenix-alpha1
2022-03-11 20:31:22 +0000 UTCIt looking like a great little comic
samantha rebecca clarkson
2022-03-11 19:59:10 +0000 UTCYou spelled “answer” wrong, but other than that, it looks good~
Brenden Seitz
2022-03-11 19:57:44 +0000 UTC
