INTEMPERANCE X - Chapter 23, You Can't Hide Your Lyin' Eyes
Added 2025-11-01 07:54:34 +0000 UTCThings are speeding up. Here's a chapter that advances a few plot lines and reintroduces a character we haven't heard from in a while. Also, there's an illustration. SFW. The first is what I wanted to show. The second is a hilarious misunderstanding of my prompt for the picture on the first attempt. I just wanted the other bikes to be a bit smaller than Jake's to match the narrative, but that is what I got. It's so bizzarre, you can't help but laugh. Even those of you who dislike my illustrations should take a look. It'll ease your mind about AI taking over the world.
Comments
To even say that would be an unacceptable spoiler. Sorry. And I am quite fairly compensated by Amazon and whatever Bookapy is going by these days. Not to mention the generous contributions from my Patrons like yourself.
Al Steiner
2025-11-04 20:39:46 +0000 UTCWhat are we looking at... rough ball park... for this one wrapping and being on Amazon kindle? I like to get it all at one time and from Amazon so I can get it in my Kindle easily. I am eager to get my hands on the finished book and immerse! Also, do you get a fair cut of sails from Amazon? I know it's not a big purchase price but aside from easy Kindle accessibility, I like to give back just a little more for your efforts.
Christopher Emge
2025-11-04 20:15:17 +0000 UTCReally liked the contrast between the Jake and Matt scenes. In my mind I pictured the bike scene as bright and exciting vs a depressing and almost dark scene at Matt’s place- another great chapter!
Ryan B
2025-11-02 00:47:21 +0000 UTCjeeeeez, I can't get that song outa my head!!! Thanks Al.... thanks a lot. (great story line though!)
Russ Wideman
2025-11-01 20:06:12 +0000 UTC
