INTEMPERANCE IX - Chapter 16, Communication Breakdown
Added 2025-05-22 05:40:34 +0000 UTCI was able to plow ahead and get another chapter out, including a scene that was requested and delivered: Barb vs Judge Olson. Let me know how I did. I was shooting for epic. Also, a nice development with Caydee and Pa-Ho, if you're enjoying that little subplot.
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Well, fucking A. The Empire Strikes Back
Gerald Deutsch
2025-05-24 10:32:49 +0000 UTCThis isn't in the original, but the edit repeats two sentences near the end, starting with "They're building a public case.".
William Cleveland
2025-05-24 03:39:26 +0000 UTC
