INTEMPERANCE VIII - Chapter 2, Little Passenger
Added 2024-02-13 05:55:37 +0000 UTCThe tour goes on and so do the lives of Jake, Celia, Laura, and Caydee. Did Celia's baby make it through the fallopian tube to its destination? Is she really pregnant at all? These questions are answered in this chapter. As always, let me know how I'm doing. And don't forget what is going on in the world at this point in history. That will come into play soon as well.
Comments
Damn, that takes me back to when mini-me was on the way.
Adam Driscoll
2024-02-18 04:42:44 +0000 UTCAlmost at the end of the chapter - "...controls on the machine. The few zoomed out until the embryo was... " Should 'few' be 'view' ?
Barry
2024-02-16 01:09:32 +0000 UTC
