INTEMPERANCE VII - Chapter 7, Giving Thanks
Added 2023-04-08 22:03:30 +0000 UTCSorry it took a while to get this one out, but it's kind of a pivotal chapter and I wanted to get it right. As always, let me know how I'm doing, your feedback helps drive the story, and remember that conflict is necessary in any tale.
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Is this the right place to post possible typos?“I’m good,” she told him. Laura was just talking. This starts a paragraph of Jake's. I think this should read "I'm good," he told her.
Michael Slade
2024-02-03 00:38:26 +0000 UTCKeep them coming!
Brett Grayson
2023-04-19 16:20:41 +0000 UTCYeah, I forget sometimes. Sorry.
Al Steiner
2023-04-10 02:58:38 +0000 UTCMinor anal-rentitive comment - you have Laura going upstairs a couple of times to her and Jake’s bedroom in a one-story house…..
ts569jj
2023-04-10 01:37:30 +0000 UTC
