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INTEMPERANCE VI

No charge for this post. Just letting all my patrons know that Intemperance VI is now published on Amazon and available if anyone wants a complete, final-edited copy. I will now start working on INTEMPERANCE VII.

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reading this chapter stirred a lot of emotions, at first I was hating the fact that a character (and story) that I had been following for years was likely dead. I was elated to find out that wasn't the case. I too was home that day and watched in horror as those towers fell. I can't imagine what it was like to be an American that day, but the acts of kindness and heroism that day were a thing to behold.

Russ Wideman

It started off that way and then I thought it was too sordid and exploitive so I changed it to the talent agent at 18.

Al Steiner

DAMN, i DID IT AGAIN! Anyway I was listeng to chapter 20 the other day and it sounded to me that it was her vocal coach at 13 who taught her about the ountment.

John Steffen

Sorry about that.

John Steffen


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