INTEMPERANCE V - Chapter 5, The Tax Man
Added 2021-05-01 05:51:05 +0000 UTCThis chapter is a few pages shorter than normal, but I said everything I needed to say in it and did not want to just add extraneous narrative for the sake of reaching an arbitrary minimum. I also will have to retcon a tad in an earlier chapter. As one of my Patrons pointed out to me a few chapters back, Matt's middle name is Norman, something I'd forgotten when I wrote his hotel name as "Alan" or "Glenn" or something like that. In any case, there's lots of Matt in this one. Hope you enjoy and please continue to let me know how I'm doing, especially if I got any of the tax things wrong.
Comments
Ha! If it means you pump out more awesome chapters then drink away!
Jeff Cudley
2021-05-20 10:55:10 +0000 UTCThings like that happen when I drink while I'm writing.
Al Steiner
2021-05-19 22:01:41 +0000 UTCBeen a bit behind with my reading. Great chapter as always and hard to see Matt having it all come back to bite him on the arse. One minor issue. After Matt calls Kim, he responds “Probably.” But you have Jake said rather than Matt.
Jeff Cudley
2021-05-18 21:44:09 +0000 UTCYou read out of order? Fortunately, I don't think it really matters to the overall plot because those two chapters were unrelated. And yes, I've had a personal experience much like Matt did from experimenting with edibles. And I see Greg-like incidents in the ED all the time.
Al Steiner
2021-05-09 21:14:48 +0000 UTCHuh, I downloaded this, but apparently didn't read it ...what a rip! Man, this was a great chapter. I love watching Matt fuck with Greg ...and nice job describing the effects of quality edibles. Matt has to be alternating between shock and rage at this point; Hoople better hope that he can stay on the run.
Adam Driscoll
2021-05-09 06:11:19 +0000 UTC
