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A thought on the subtitle for Book IV

The usual disclaimer: You are not being charged for this post. Only new chapters of the Intemperance tale are charged.

That being said, I'd like to throw out my thought on what the ultimate subtitle of Intemperance IV--I am now writing what is likely the last chapter of it before I start Book V--should be changed to. As I mentioned before, I originally subtitled the book "Never Say Never" with the thought that that subtitle would be relevant by the end. Well... I didn't get to that part of the story yet and that will likely end up being Book V's subtitle (although I've learned my lesson. No more subtitles assigned until the project is complete).

In any case, I was thinking "Snowblind" as the Book IV subtitle.  This is a dual reference.  It applies to the Mindy Snow issue that pervades much of the book and also to Matt Tisdale's cocaine addiction, which is also a major theme.  It's also the name of a rock song by Styx (one of my favorite by that band, in fact), and such references to song lyrics and/or titles are scattered throughout other chapter headings as well.

Thoughts?

Comments

Snowblind is quite fitting.

Kim Biel-Nielsen

Love snowblind, very apt and I have so enjoyed these chapters. Keep up the brilliant work!

Steve Braden


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