INTEMPERANCE IV, Chapter 25, The Court of Public Opinion
Added 2021-01-12 03:04:20 +0000 UTCThis was a tough chapter to write and I struggled with it a bit. But here it is. Please let me know how I did. Is what happened easy to follow? Am I holding up suspension of disbelief? Did Mindy get what is coming to her to some degree? Please, no suggestions of violence toward Mindy. Celia does not really roll that way and neither do I.
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You're really going to like the next chapter then.
Al Steiner
2021-01-25 21:15:33 +0000 UTCBrilliant piece of writing Al. It was about time Mindy got her comeuppance and what a pleasure it was to read... so pleasurable in fact, that I have re-read it several times!
Dave Sanney
2021-01-25 08:09:16 +0000 UTCI don't believe I portrayed rye as being popular. It did, however, exist in 1996 and I portrayed a depressed Greg as experimenting with it. I am sorry about the WhistlePig thing. I always try to research such things when I mention them in the book, but I could not come up with a date for when WhistlePig came out. I had no idea people took their WhistlePig this seriously.
Al Steiner
2021-01-24 20:56:49 +0000 UTCHmm, my only caveat is portraying bourbon/rye as popular in the 1990s. Pappy 23 was available in stores at MSRP 10 years ago, so WP 18 Double Malt at 260, when its MSRP is 360 now, but wasn't released until 2 years ago? We'll chalk it up to creative license :)
K
2021-01-20 07:53:21 +0000 UTC
