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INTEMPERANCE IV, Never Say Never - Chapter 23, The Show Must Go On

Greg confesses to Celia what he has done.  She is not happy about it.

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I will fix it the next time I update. I do my own editing because I cannot afford a professional editor and an amateur one would miss things that I wouldn't.

Al Steiner

I'm late to the game and loving catching up.... Tiny quibble: "plane of existence", not 'plain', but for jake I could see plane being a great pun.

Adam Crafter

Wonderful, wonderful chapter. Can't wait for 24. Minor nitpick: in my experience, I've never known a woman who could temporarily ignore bad, earth-shattering, devastating news and still have sex. Celia had to suspect that infidelity was about the only thing that could make Greg act like that (it's not like he was dying or something) and yet she still got naked with him. That rings a little untrue to me -- but maybe I've just never known the right women!! :D


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