INTEMPERANCE IV - Never Say Never, Chapter 21, Life Is Good
Added 2020-10-21 03:19:10 +0000 UTCA lighthearted, feel-good chapter. Perhaps a transitional one? Perhaps some foreshadowing? Perhaps the calm before the storm? Anyway, hope you enjoy it. I enjoyed writing this one a lot. It flowed out of me quite easily.
Comments
I have already caught the Celia and Neesh error and corrected it for the Kindle version. As for New Zealand and Hawaii, they are 22 hours apart thanks to the International Date Line, but to the human circadian rhythm, it would only seem like a two hour time difference. For instance, as I write this, it is 10:30 AM in Honolulu and 8:30 AM in Auckland--only two hours apart (most of the long flight between the two places is north to south, crossing latitude lines, not longitude)-- but in Honolulu it is Friday, October 30 and in Auckland, it is Saturday, October 31. I stand by how I wrote that as accurate, but perhaps I will explain that better in the Kindle version.
Al Steiner
2020-10-30 19:40:00 +0000 UTCI'm thinking somewhere in the 26-28 range? Not exactly sure. The chapters in IV, however, are generally shorter than in III by 5-8 pages or so. This is mostly because III was too lengthy to publish as a paperback on Kindle so I went to an effort to make IV a little smaller on the word count. I don't think, however, that I really accomplished that.
Al Steiner
2020-10-28 08:43:17 +0000 UTChow many chapters are you expecting IV to be if you have any idea yet? btw new patreon, but i think i have read probably 80% of all your stuff in SOL and its great!
Mike C
2020-10-28 06:04:34 +0000 UTC
