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INTEMPERANCE IV - Never Say Never, Chapter 16, I Remember You

I got a little unscheduled time off work this week so I had more time to work on the next chapter.  And here it is. This one is truly pivotal and I'd love to hear some feedback on how I pulled off the scenes.  Believable? Am I staying in character?  Please enjoy (hopefully) and let me know how I did.

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One thing I will say is I think that the Jake Kingsley and Gordon of this world would not be so into the genre I would call copaganda… to me, it would be in character if they knew some of the history of pro police propaganda and that, just like military recruiters, police PR have the big budgets and soft and hard influence over media.

For Mindy to change her spots, I would have to see her return her ill gotten money to her ex-husband and to give him the photographic negatives


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