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[WIP] Parental Rehearsal [Page 04]
Added 2021-06-04 19:43:30 +0000 UTCAnd here's the sketch of page 4, hope you'll like it!
Comments
I will ;)
2021-06-05 19:51:05 +0000 UTCThanks for the correction!
2021-06-05 19:49:03 +0000 UTCThanks Ricardo!
2021-06-05 19:48:47 +0000 UTCIf Soap has typos that you see let him know early so he can change it if you see them. He encourages people to do it.
2021-06-05 14:45:22 +0000 UTCyou have typo's my friend. please correct them in the final print.
2021-06-05 05:17:41 +0000 UTCI'm looking forward to the new series of comics :)
2021-06-05 00:51:11 +0000 UTCMy suggestion would be "you were afraid to feel"
2021-06-04 21:42:48 +0000 UTCI would say that "....do a little roleplay..." sounds alright in this context. It sounds like its a small amount of the activity, like "do a little running." If you do change it Soap, go with "....do some roleplay..."
Ricardo de Cervantes
2021-06-04 20:42:31 +0000 UTCThanks a ton for all the corrections!
2021-06-04 19:55:31 +0000 UTCGreat to more of this comic so quickly :3
2021-06-04 19:54:39 +0000 UTCLooks great! Two things though. I think it would be "Last time you said you were afraid 'you felt' incompetent or inexperienced as a dad" as well as I would say Roleplay is more of a verb than a noun so "A roleplay" sounds odd, I would just say Roleplay instead of A Roleplay
YourLieInApril
2021-06-04 19:49:58 +0000 UTC
