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[Comics] A Halloween to remember - Page 13

Today I continued to work on comics instead of the usual Fan Art, hope you'll like the pages!

Thanks to the people who correct the dialogues!

[Comics] A Halloween to remember - Page 13

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Thanks Secret, it's corrected!

Thanks a lot Ricardo, it's corrected!

I think "See? That wasn't so bad" sounds more natural

Great pages soap! I would say one more correction in the center speech bubble would be to change "that" to "this" as in, "...somebody sees me like this..."

Ricardo de Cervantes


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