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[WIP] A Halloween to remember [Page 11]
Added 2021-04-02 18:56:43 +0000 UTCNew Wip of the MHA comic, hope you'll like it!
Comments
Thanks Secret!
2021-04-03 10:32:20 +0000 UTCSome corrections, the first phrase doesn't flow well I'd go with "Wait, what about the interview?", "I can't stay like this", "This street is deserted, it should do".
2021-04-02 19:39:25 +0000 UTCNo problem. Oh, and I also just noticed in the same speech bubble, it should be "this should do" instead of "that"
Tene
2021-04-02 19:00:21 +0000 UTCThanks Tene, I'll make sure to correct that!
2021-04-02 18:58:53 +0000 UTCSecond panel, should be "street is deserted" not desert. And "stay like this" instead of "that"
Tene
2021-04-02 18:58:04 +0000 UTC
