[WIP] A Halloween to remember [Page 3]

Thanks a ton for all these extra corrections, Martin!

This comic is coming along super nice ^^ I just have a few suggested corrections: "It all begin one week ago" (began) "This woman call herself" (calls) "the muscles of her ennemies" (enemies) "and could be easily defeated" (easily be defeated) "allows her to control the blader of someone." (bladder)

Thanks Ricardo, and thanks for the corrections!

Thanks a lot for the correction Secret, I like your revised version better! For the name, I didn't search for something that had a signification, just something that sounds okay.

"This woman calls herself Boku, she can control the muscles of her enemies. Despites this, she's not very powerful and could have been easily defeated but her quirk also allows her to control someone's bladder." "Humiliating the heroes in this way allowed her enough time to escape." Great new pages so far Soap!

Ricardo de Cervantes

I mean, as puns go, you are violating them pretty hard by controlling their bodily functions

Ricardo de Cervantes

Ok, let's see. "This woman called herself Boku, she can control the sphincters of her enemies. She's not very powerful and could have been easily defeated but her quirk allows her to control the bladder of someone. Humiliating the heroes in this way allowed her enough time to escape." So, some personal feedback. Firstly, I changed the quirk from muscles to sphincters because having a quirk that allows you to control muscles is very much overpowered and it doesn't make sense for the next sentence to say she isn't very powerful. Sphincters just makes more sense as it would kinda fit what you described. Secondly, I'm not sure if naming her "Boko" fits with the naming scheme the rest of the cast has. "Boko" just means "violation" which is fitting for what she does but it's not a pun off anything.