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[WIP] A Halloween to remember [Page 1]
Added 2020-09-05 19:16:27 +0000 UTCWorking on the first page of the MHA comic, hope you'll like it!
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But this makes us lose the pleasure of reading because we have already read the pages, so I suggest that you publish mere parts of the pages without details every period as a mere excitement and at the same time this will not waste us the pleasure of reading it when it is finished
2020-09-08 12:18:55 +0000 UTCShould I feel bad that I'm a native English speaker and didn't notice those?
2020-09-06 22:56:08 +0000 UTCYour welcome
2020-09-06 17:51:28 +0000 UTCThanks for the extra correction Bull!
2020-09-06 17:11:05 +0000 UTCThanks a lot for all the corrections Secret!
2020-09-06 17:10:25 +0000 UTCI'm making it page by page so it makes more sense to me to share it that way
2020-09-06 17:09:38 +0000 UTCYou could also use crimes aren't that big in Osaka also, whatever you feel more comfortable saying.
2020-09-06 02:23:46 +0000 UTCI would use crime isn't that big in Osaka intead, but everything else Secret suggested sounds good.
2020-09-06 02:10:10 +0000 UTCnow, this is epic
2020-09-05 23:04:43 +0000 UTCOk, lots of corrections here. "It's been 2 years since we graduated from UA", "Momo, Tsuyu and I became heroes here and joined Mt. Lady's team", "Crime isn't that big in Osaka and the work was almost boring"
2020-09-05 21:35:00 +0000 UTCOooh, very nice
2020-09-05 20:47:49 +0000 UTCI see they caught that giant villain from the first chapter, just can't keep a good minor villain down.
Baltan2
2020-09-05 20:32:25 +0000 UTCoh oh Ochako have a little secret ^^
rwann
2020-09-05 20:20:36 +0000 UTCI’m excited to see which ideas you chose for this comic! Fingers crossed it’s humiliation based!
2020-09-05 20:14:27 +0000 UTCCan you share the comic all at once instead of publishing it page by page?
2020-09-05 19:55:05 +0000 UTCThis is going to.be great I can tell.
sage1324
2020-09-05 19:51:51 +0000 UTC
