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[WIP] A Teen Titan's Toilet Troubles - Page 18
Added 2020-01-03 18:04:01 +0000 UTCNext page of the Teen Titan comic, hope you'll like it!
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"You need... to be changed immediately!" Pffft as if XD
Feartheoldblood
2020-01-07 03:21:49 +0000 UTCThanks!
2020-01-04 16:03:52 +0000 UTCThanks for the cue Shadow, I'll integrate that instead!
2020-01-04 16:03:39 +0000 UTCThanks Roberto! I think this one shouldn't take much more than 4/5 pages to end!
2020-01-04 16:03:00 +0000 UTCThanks, happy you like the page Ricardo!
2020-01-04 16:02:26 +0000 UTCaww star dont let wittle Raven get diaper rash
Aura_bullet
2020-01-04 06:01:37 +0000 UTCHere is a link with some examples explained https://thestarfirearchives.tumblr.com/post/154347605863/starfires-speech-patterns Hope it helps, feel free to make the decision yourself.
Shadowpaladin
2020-01-04 00:09:23 +0000 UTCI've watched a lot of teen titans m, from how i remember it i think she'd say "Babies do not do the talking back." She often uses the word the when it is unnecessary.
Shadowpaladin
2020-01-04 00:08:09 +0000 UTCSeeing this page reminded me how glad I am that you're back! I had forgotten about this comic but can't wait to see more now!
2020-01-03 19:06:20 +0000 UTCAwesome Page Soap! Looks like everyone else caught the spelling mistakes so you're all good now!
Ricardo de Cervantes
2020-01-03 18:39:30 +0000 UTCCute!! Also I like where Starfire is headed :)
DimZebra
2020-01-03 18:37:44 +0000 UTCIt helps, thanks a lot evilengine!
2020-01-03 18:23:18 +0000 UTCThanks! I'm still making so much basic mistakes!
2020-01-03 18:22:36 +0000 UTCif I had to suggest speech edits, panel 1: "I'd rather be dead" does work, but you could maybe use "I wish I was dead." Also "You ate all your compote" not "eat" (unless that's Starfire's usual speech pattern?) In the last panel: "Babies do not talk back" rather than "does not" (again, unless Starfire normally talks that way. Hope this helps, very good work ^_^
2020-01-03 18:20:26 +0000 UTC"You ate all" not "you eat"
2020-01-03 18:20:25 +0000 UTCPoor Raven has a rash
Sparkles73
2020-01-03 18:19:47 +0000 UTC
