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[WIP] Adventures from Dimension A24L [Page 43]
Added 2019-09-06 21:13:53 +0000 UTCAnd another wip for the Rick and Morty comic, hope you'll like it!
Comments
Exactlyt! It's easier for me to correct before the final picture!
2019-09-13 09:24:24 +0000 UTCOf course! I've seen people give notes in the past so I figured you wouldnt take offense. Plus I'm guessing your want these notes before posting the final image. :P
Chase Cougar
2019-09-08 19:23:07 +0000 UTCThanks a lot for the corrections Josh! I'm not a native english speaker so I still make plenty of mistakes, it really helps when people point them out!
2019-09-08 12:08:12 +0000 UTCWell it is a WIP, so I'm sure the grammar is due to the dialogue being NOTES.
Rhyzeless
2019-09-08 08:46:51 +0000 UTCThis is great! Just a few Grammer notes! /// Summer need to go to potty should be "Summer needs to go potty" /// And it should be "You haven't made a number two since you've been back, I was starting to worry." /// And last speech bubble should be "would you mind GETTING the diaper pack..."
Chase Cougar
2019-09-07 20:48:32 +0000 UTCThat's a doozy~
Onihara
2019-09-07 14:58:40 +0000 UTCI think too!
2019-09-07 10:44:31 +0000 UTCThere will be two more pages before the end of the comic
2019-09-07 10:43:14 +0000 UTCThis pleases me. <3 I knew it was ending soon from the last update you had, so I was curious how it would end.
Matt
2019-09-06 22:30:07 +0000 UTCIs there going to be a part 2? After you finish this one
Clone619
2019-09-06 22:23:15 +0000 UTCThanks a lot for the corrections Ricardo!
2019-09-06 21:32:03 +0000 UTCAhah, it's just an ending, it's not going to be something mind blowing ;) And there's only two pages left after this one so we won't see the change anyways!
2019-09-06 21:31:51 +0000 UTCThat mess really is massive. I think this is the biggest one you've done so far
2019-09-06 21:30:03 +0000 UTCI believe in you Soap. I'm waiting for the special ending you have in mind. I know your audience likes filled diapers, but we got 2 diaper changing types scenes back to back. :3
Matt
2019-09-06 21:22:31 +0000 UTCGreat page soap! Here are a few corrections, first panel "needs", middle panel "....haven't made.... since you've been...", last panel "...get used..." and "...getting the diaper bag...."
Ricardo de Cervantes
2019-09-06 21:18:04 +0000 UTCI agree with BB
2019-09-06 21:16:05 +0000 UTCAmazing
BeastBear5568
2019-09-06 21:14:20 +0000 UTC
